Well, I already know that teenagers today reasons for being inmates are stealing, gang banging, fighting, etc. Also, they see things that come from their homes from certain family members. What I mean by that is, if a certain family member is a abusive person, that teenager, may see it as if since he/she is doing it and not getting in trouble for its action, that teenager would see it as if he/she is doing it, then I could do it.
No

Sometimes some teenagers are force into things they don’t want to do, and after awhile their mind would feed into it till where it changes their whole personality.See and when the actually get where they don’t want to be at. They look scared and afraid like

I want to know:
I want to know do the teenage inmates learn from their mistakes. And when they get out do they still do what they do, or they make a new start. And do they actually think bout what they’ve done and what they could’ve done instead of doing what the did. I also want to know, how many teenagers actually gets locked up for what the court say they have done. And I actually want to know how does prison life feel to them if that’s there first time. Cause some teenagers think its nothing. But I know its something.
That’s it that’s all .
http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/chi-paris_wittfeb13,0,5949967.story
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Its real good that you have pics of imates up there 8
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7
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U provide good detail
i like how u use a real jila picture
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You should have added more information on personal life
Victoria,
ReplyDeleteOne of your greatest strengths is your sense of logic. You break concepts down in a way that people can understand. Your writing is getting stronger.
By the way: Uhhh...what's up with the huge Chucky? I'm just saying...