What I know:
Well, I already know that teenagers today reasons for being inmates are stealing, gang banging, fighting, etc. Also, they see things that come from their homes from certain family members. What I mean by that is, if a certain family member is a abusive person, that teenager, may see it as if since he/she is doing it and not getting in trouble for its action, that teenager would see it as if he/she is doing it, then I could do it.
Now, some teenagers like this young fella (LEFT) have been charged of assaulting another teenager. Now I know that he has seen that within his home. Now when you think about it, those are the basics of why teenagers get locked up. But on the other had some teenagers that’s in prison, are in their from someone else. Not every teenager does wrong that like s to hang in the streets. They make bad mistakes for what they did. But in teenagers mind in today’s world, they would put it on any and every body but them.
Sometimes some teenagers are force into things they don’t want to do, and after awhile their mind would feed into it till where it changes their whole personality.See and when the actually get where they don’t want to be at. They look scared and afraid like this young fella (RIGHT). See every teenager be tough on the streets bout when they get behind bars they soft. But I also know that its mainly teenage African American males that’s in prison. But its not only the males that have gotten into trouble. It’s the females as well. Even though the females today are doing the same thing as the males, but some females are doing it more than the males.
I want to know:
I want to know do the teenage inmates learn from their mistakes. And when they get out do they still do what they do, or they make a new start. And do they actually think bout what they’ve done and what they could’ve done instead of doing what the did. I also want to know, how many teenagers actually gets locked up for what the court say they have done. And I actually want to know how does prison life feel to them if that’s there first time. Cause some teenagers think its nothing. But I know its something.
That’s it that’s all .
http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/chi-paris_wittfeb13,0,5949967.story
Thursday, March 5, 2009
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You should have added more information on personal life
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By the way: Uhhh...what's up with the huge Chucky? I'm just saying...